by Ehsun S.
Find me dwelling in this deepness,
Among the trenches of my heart,
Care, Passion, Love, Depression,
Trace me back to where I start.
Seek me in this barren land,
A world that's set ablaze,
In the center lies a garden,
Hunt me in this maze.
Save me from my infernal complex,
This demon tears me from inside,
Rage, Fear, Anger, Hatred,
Protect me from what I hide.
Watch me drowning my emotion,
With iron hands that feel no pain,
Love looks upon me in sympathy,
Sorrow treats me with disdain.
Yet my emotions return renewed,
To pain me in soft silence,
Alas! My hour has come to bleed,
Hear me! My Lament of Innocence!
Parable of Faith
“The smart man is the one who takes stock of himself and strives to do that which will benefit him after death, and the helpless one is the one who follows his own whims and desires and engages in wishful thinking, (assuming that Allah will forgive him regardless of what he does and that he does not need to strive to good deeds).” (Reported by Al-Bukhari)
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15 comments
Comment by Silent Night on Tuesday, June 26, 2007
Wow. Beautiful.
Comment by Aishah on Wednesday, June 27, 2007
your blog is perfect. even in its flaws. i don't remember the last time i read anything with such careless abandon. thank you.
Comment by someone on Wednesday, June 27, 2007
That was awesome!!
Comment by sevencarpileup on Tuesday, July 03, 2007
I felt like I was reading Godsmack lyrics. I very much enjoy Godsmack.
Comment by paradise on Thursday, July 12, 2007
I love it, you really have a way with words mashas Allah.
Comment by Scarlet Cloak on Saturday, July 14, 2007
Ahh...interesting
Must say, its quite profound...
Thumbs Up
Comment by Ragheb on Wednesday, July 18, 2007
Woww... thanks a lot guys for the complements... i really appreciate it...
Comment by bean on Thursday, July 19, 2007
wow, that was amazing mashaAllah! Keep up the good work!
Comment by ice rain on Friday, July 20, 2007
oh no..i think i might just like it!
Comment by Perplxint3xan on Friday, July 27, 2007
To say the usual 'awesome' or 'mashallah' would be an understatement.
The beauty in your writing lies in you, you know you've got talent. Your shameless approach in humble writings is a privilege to read everytime... :)
Comment by Ragheb on Friday, July 27, 2007
Oh wow, you guys really do me too much honor. I really appreciate all of your comments. And If I have any skill or talent, then please remember that it comes from Allah SWT alone. Praise is due to Him, and I just wish to be subservient to Him.
And Eloquence, don't hesitate at all for the long comments :P
Long comments just as much as short ones are always welcome, but long ones last longer (duh) so they are more pleasurable to read.
Thanks for the catch on the mistake, I've fixed it. I write best during the night, it's more peaceful then and I'm sort of a night person anyways. And YES insha Allah, I hope to get an entry in before the end of July, but alas! who knows? This summer is busy for me, and sleeping late as I used to costs me dearly :P
But insha Allah I will have something soon.
Jazakallah Khair for all of your comments!
Comment by Serenity on Tuesday, July 31, 2007
It's so.. well said. Masha'Allah.
Comment by dreamer on Saturday, August 04, 2007
Well-written, and interesting too.
Comment by TheGossamerThread on Saturday, August 18, 2007
Yo bud! U cant keep ur readers waiting so long. you definately need to post something amazing to make up for the long wait!!
P.S. once you figure out who it is dont blow my cover -- also do you remember this poem, from our sub teacher?!
Comment by Ragheb on Thursday, August 23, 2007
yessss, sorry... summer has been hectic and uninspirational...
and entry to come soon... insha Allah...
and what sub-teacher mr/ms. gossamer?